She was alone, standing in a massive field. No one was there, no sign of life, except her own beating heart.
No green trees, no car noise, no houses.. no nothing.
It was her and only her.
But what was she doing there? The last thing she remembers she was walking down the street at night, dark and mysterious night, and now.. it seems like she’s lost.
Suddenly, she heard footsteps, loud footsteps. How could it be? she thought she was the only living thing there. So she waited, waiting is all she could do.
A cold -dead- hand touches her neck, caressing her. She turns fast; She turns and as soon as she pulls her hand up to hit what’s behind her, she freezes.
She just stood there, her heart skipping a beat. It was Him.
Her dear long loved man…
“What… What are you doing here?”
-“Shh.. come with me.” He said so calmly.
“But..” i paused. “where to? ”
-“No where , and everywhere, all at once.” he smiled.
Ohh.. that smile! That half mind-blowing smile of his. She took his hand without giving it a second thought, and, the second her skin touched his, everything turned colorful again. The whole nature turned bright.
And then i knew… i was dreaming.
N.B: This is my first short story EVER.Write down all of your criticism in the comment box 🙂 Thank you for reading! Hope you enjoyed it !
Very nice first try at short story-telling 🙂 Keep up the good work!
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Thank you ❤️❤️❤️❤️
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Held my attention…bravo for you.
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Thank you so much ! ☺️ Glad you liked it !
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This was a good attempt.Details were pretty good.:)
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Thanks ❤️❤️
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“No where, and everywhere,all at once.” ❤ Nice story 🙂
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Very good attempt!! Always a pleasure to read your posts!
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Thank you 😍😍😍
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You’re welcome
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You’d be an expert writer in no time ! Keep this up, very nice story sara 😊
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Oh wow !!! Thank you so so much 😍❤️
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This was a great read.
Had my attention from the first line to the very last. Your smooth.
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Thank you Cezane ☺️ Glad you liked it !! ❤️
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